The Catechism of Saint Pope Pius X
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This isn't a pitch deck; it's a theological document. We invest in disruptors, not divine revelations.

Story & Problem

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Your 'problem' is a lack of understanding of 19th-century Catholic doctrine. Last I checked, VCs aren't funding spiritual enlightenment, especially when your 'solution' is a freely available text.

Market Size

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Your 'Total Addressable Market' seems to be 'every soul on earth.' That's certainly large, but for a catechism distributed for free, your commercial viability is less than divine.

Business Model

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A business model that explicitly states 'distributed free of charge' and then 'may request an additional donation not to exceed US$15'? I've seen lemonade stands with clearer monetization strategies than this.

Team

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Your team slide is conspicuously absent, unless 'St. Pope Pius X (ca. 1880)' and 'J.H. Irish College, Rome Feast of Saint Charles Borromeo, 1911' are your visionary co-founders. We fund founders with a pulse, not historical credits.

Traction & GTM

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Your 'traction' is a 2005 copyright on a public domain document from 1880. Your GTM strategy is 'distribute it for free,' which means you've mastered distribution but forgotten the 'venture' in venture capital.

Design & Clarity

3.0

The design is... functional, if you're aiming for a look and feel that screams 'public domain text from 1880.' While clear in its Q&A format, it’s more suited for quiet contemplation than a compelling investment narrative.

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