“This isn't a pitch deck; it's a theological document. We invest in disruptors, not divine revelations.”
Story & Problem
1.0Your 'problem' is a lack of understanding of 19th-century Catholic doctrine. Last I checked, VCs aren't funding spiritual enlightenment, especially when your 'solution' is a freely available text.
Market Size
1.0Your 'Total Addressable Market' seems to be 'every soul on earth.' That's certainly large, but for a catechism distributed for free, your commercial viability is less than divine.
Business Model
0.0A business model that explicitly states 'distributed free of charge' and then 'may request an additional donation not to exceed US$15'? I've seen lemonade stands with clearer monetization strategies than this.
Team
0.0Your team slide is conspicuously absent, unless 'St. Pope Pius X (ca. 1880)' and 'J.H. Irish College, Rome Feast of Saint Charles Borromeo, 1911' are your visionary co-founders. We fund founders with a pulse, not historical credits.
Traction & GTM
0.0Your 'traction' is a 2005 copyright on a public domain document from 1880. Your GTM strategy is 'distribute it for free,' which means you've mastered distribution but forgotten the 'venture' in venture capital.
Design & Clarity
3.0The design is... functional, if you're aiming for a look and feel that screams 'public domain text from 1880.' While clear in its Q&A format, it’s more suited for quiet contemplation than a compelling investment narrative.
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